Steamy hot short story

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  1. wild1s

    wild1s Naughty 'n Nice Registered Member

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    Very few people know that Sam writes as a hobby. He had never written a trashy romance novel or short story but when I was reading 50 Shades, he picked it up and thought he could do that. Here's his first attempt. If you have an hour or so to read it, let us know what you think. You may recognize some things. (Fiction people, fiction!)

    http://www.booksie.com/true_confessions/novel/sindy_smith/tempted/chapter/1

    Ok, I published it as a short story and there was not enough room. Now it's published as a novel and is split into two chapters. After reading the first, return to the top of the page and click on chapter 2.
     
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    LadynTramp I can choose my own title Registered Member

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    Wet!...........................
     
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    Slightly swollen after the first paragraph.
     
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    Nice piece of bedtime reading...
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    Donald Devil's advocate Registered Member

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    same here
     
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    wild1s Naughty 'n Nice Registered Member

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    I just realized that the entire story didn't load into the site. I guess it was too long. I'll post the remainder tomorrow. Sorry!
     
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    wild1s Naughty 'n Nice Registered Member

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    Reposted now with the full story in two chapters.
     
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    Well done!
     
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    wild1s Naughty 'n Nice Registered Member

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    Sam says "thanks" TimBeck2! Hope you enjoyed it.
     
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    PaulnTina Guru Registered Member

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    Wow

    Great writing and an excellent read !!!!!!!
     
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